Perfect poem - stark and powerful.
a cold, sad senryu Pris - perfect.PS I hope that wasn't Lloyd slamming the door, leaving a note saying 'I just can't fix your ####### computer any more - threw it in the garbage!'
hi dougthanks. lloyd and I opened up his blog after the install and found your comment...said he'd commented on yours. We're both glad to see you back.geoffActually the note said....oh, can't reveal.:-) and thanks.
Yes, this is good. Hope you have seen the last of the computer problems.
I like it --- it leaves so much to the imagination -- I need to work on such thingsandrew
Oops..typos in the above...Michael...me, too!and Andrew, I've been posting on Haiku Hut for probably four years now and am still learning haiku and senryu. As you well know, it's harder to write well than anyone can imagine before trying.
To the point! Love it! I just checked out haiga pages and will put the link on my website soon. Thanks.
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