Monday, April 10, 2006

Trombone Angels (Two)

(This poem grew up of a poet's suggestion on MySpace about mixing parts of poems. I played with the idea with my 'two poems', posted earlier, merging the two seven minute poems there. I then worked with the merge on paper, adding to it. Here's the new version.)

The trombone angels have no teeth.
No ears.
Lips like a frozen kiss.
Their last dance was in the air,
ghost band hovering over the flames
at Auschwitz, Cambodia, Iraq.
Dressed in black raincoats,
they shuffle to fresh graveyards
and bone laden ditches,
feet cut and dirty.

What did they think
when they once flew,
ground rushing beneath them so fast?
Did they see gods reach
out to snatch soul from body
before flesh died?
Is that too much to believe?
Too much to hope for?

They blow a sweet tune
for those who no longer buy lies
from bible-rumped matrons
about lesser gods
for those not washed by Christ's blood
or chained to a catholic sainthood.
Those matrons claim we're all sinners.
They cast the first stones to prove it.

The wail of the trombones rises
as night tosses its net of stars.
A cock cries three times.
The silence from the graves is deafening.


Pat Paulk said...

Pris, you cut and paste pretty darn good!!

Pris said...

Thanks, Pat. I made a recording of this, complete with some opening effects and music behind me, but I have to load it to my site and create a meta file to make it stream in order to post it here and I'm just plum out of energy (my southern roots showing there:-)

I'm going to get it done at some point.

erin said...

I like this... I have always loved angels, and the images here are wonderful... I will have to read the originals when I have time. I have posted some more poetry. Ok, a poem, but I did some writing, and that is what counts, right? Stop by and see me some time!

Pris said...

Hi Erin
Thanks. I'll come check out your blog right now. Haven't been there in a few days.