autumn to autumn
the soles of my shoes
still clean
Pris Campbell
(c)2005
Later Edit:
Goeff Sanderson kindly contributed this photo, at my request, to use with the above haiku in a collaboration for the haiga below.
The larger version can be seen HERE.
3 comments:
Great haiku, Pris. Now you have the epitaph on your memorial stone (not for another 100 years, of course):
'She Always Kept the Soles of her Shoes Clean'
I love haiku! I feel very self conscious when I write free-form poetry, like I can't say anything that hasn't been said better, or less tritely. But Haiku imposes a structure, and I can force my thoughts to follow those syllables and be happy with the outcome.
Gette
Think about joining Haiku Hut. It's a great board for all sorts of short forms!
Thanks for commenting.
Pris
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